Recount

Recount

Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?

Who? My family What?  Where? When? Starting question? Have you ever been for a walk in the ranges?

BODY: Describe what happened.

Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences) What happened first? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)

Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences) What happened next? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)

Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences) What happened next? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)

Conclusion (Summary) Summarise all of the main points of your recount do not add in any new details.

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences.

Banking issues

This is the task that we had to do this week it is about banking and taking money out in notes and coins and pay dates.

Hula-hoop recount

Who: Room 8

What: hula-hoop challenge

When:wednesday 16th october

Where: hard court outside our class.

First we lined up outside and listened to the instructions,
next we headed to the hard court and we held hands and
got in a circle. When we were all settled miss parrant gave us
a purple hula-hoop to go around, so what we did was put our
feet in first then head and pass it to the next person, or it could
go head first then feet in. After we warmed up we split up in
two groups of girls and boys. Well obviously the boys went first
and they thought they won but they got a penalty from my
teacher. Then the girls went and we won fair in square but the
boys got a bit jealous and called us losers but we didn’t mind,
because at the end of the day, they are just a bunch of losers
when they mock the winners but it was just a game and we all
had fun.

The end