My narrative

follow this to see what i did
Your narrative:

Characters? Tāne Hokahoka, Tāne māhuta

Setting? Forest

Problem?the tree is dying because kiwi was not home

Solution? The tiger came and helped and with the hawks going to a different country

Hi my name is Zyla A long, long, long long time ago there was these two people named Tāne hokahoka and Tāne māhuta they went to go look for kiwi since they knew that he was the only one but instead they found a white tiger but it was weird because the white tiger was in kiwi’s space where they always meet but the white tiger did alright then a hawk came and since Tāne māhuta and Tāne hoka hoka was guardian of the forest the hawk was coming after them but until the hawk saw the white tiger so they went to a different country. After that the bugs came and started eating the trees because they knew that kiwi wasn't there but they did not know that the white tiger was there so when the white tiger showed himself and so the bugs ran away and they went to the other part of the forest that is dying so they really did not care because those were fake trees and they put perfume so they die and don’t come back. At the end of the day the forest was protected from all the barriers they have put up from the fake trees. !00 Years later… there was people visiting The tree then one person started taking pictures and put it on the internet and so people started copping them and it went viral so when people go past the sign they go and take a photo or video. The End

Narrative

Hi and today we did another narrative for this week.

That really stinks.

That Really Stinks








WALT identify the characters, setting and problem in a narrative story.


WALT write an engaging solution to the problem in a narrative story.






Watch the story starter for the story, That Really Stinks.





Plan for your writing:





Characters: Sam and Jackson and the crocodile


Setting: Bathroom, Sewer


Problem:





Write the ending for the story. When he hides behind the big rock
he shows himself and they started laughing but afterwards they got
a fright because Sam had said “you need to give the phone back to me”
but the lucky thing is the monster’s dropped it but when they ran away
they dropped the phone even though that’s one lucky thing because
Sam’s sister was waiting for him out of the bathroom but he would not
answer so Sam’s sister opens the door but she never finds Sam in the
bathroom because he got taken by some old type of creature, when Sam
gets the phone he tells the crocodile to go inside the bathroom again
and finally he gets back but Sam’s sister was looking at Sam with
a vicious look and said “where were you and what happened to my phone”
but Sam did not say anything that is part of the answer because he was
scared that the tentacle stuff will come back and take the both of
them but Sam’s sister said tell me the truth so Sam had to tell
His sister the truth but what had happened next? So Sam told her
the truth and the tentacle monster come so Sam and his sister were
so surprised just for the truth, Then the tentacle monster took them
where down the sewer again, they were lost but Sam got his new pet
crocodile that he never mentioned to his sister, so he said “Out we go”
so the crocodile went and chased the tentacle monster
quietly and safely till they saw them coming to hunt for them so Sam,
his sister and the crocodile went around the rock they were behind
and succeed and they were saving all the people that were in the kitchen
and there was only one more until they heard the monster crew coming
closer and closer so they used teamwork and they did the same
thing they did before is hide behind the rock and go around while
the monsters are walking towards the kitchen and they realised that
the people were gone then this little monster realised them and said
hey there they are so the monsters were coming after them so the
crocodile went faster and faster but they saw a secret shortcut
and pretended to go the other way so they went up the shortcut
while the monsters were wondering some random place and they
said bye to the crocodile but when they went back inside the bathroom
they took the people they had saved back home but before that they
had a shower before going home when they were finished since they
were all girls Sam’s sister handled it and let Sam have a bit of a
rest from this big day. The end.





Fast finisher?





Write the beginning of the story to go with the movie.

3. • 
     

Narrative writing

Peephole Narrative

Start writing here:

Once there was four girls who were walking across town basically everyday.
One day they walked past and saw this person for the first time they all
thought that it was a dream so they turned around for a little bit then
they turned around again and then there he was sitting on in the same
spot where they saw him the last time so they asked who he was then he
just said a person who love nature so they went home to Victoria’s house
and suddenly the doorbell rang and they checked through the keyhole
and there the same person
was.

  To be continued...

Yesterday we did a keyhole narrative that we needed to finish today.Me and my buddy Aaliyah were finishng what we needed to do then we started to peer edit.

Narrative

today we started a Narrative story and a Narrative is basically a story that you make up and thats simular to the story that you have read