Athletics Technique Reflection

Today my team and I  Did a reflect of how running really works and so we can learn how to keep fit and why keeping fit could basically change our life and you can have some fun along with it.                     I followed this task

My narrative

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Your narrative:

Characters? Tāne Hokahoka, Tāne māhuta

Setting? Forest

Problem?the tree is dying because kiwi was not home

Solution? The tiger came and helped and with the hawks going to a different country

Hi my name is Zyla A long, long, long long time ago there was these two people named Tāne hokahoka and Tāne māhuta they went to go look for kiwi since they knew that he was the only one but instead they found a white tiger but it was weird because the white tiger was in kiwi’s space where they always meet but the white tiger did alright then a hawk came and since Tāne māhuta and Tāne hoka hoka was guardian of the forest the hawk was coming after them but until the hawk saw the white tiger so they went to a different country. After that the bugs came and started eating the trees because they knew that kiwi wasn't there but they did not know that the white tiger was there so when the white tiger showed himself and so the bugs ran away and they went to the other part of the forest that is dying so they really did not care because those were fake trees and they put perfume so they die and don’t come back. At the end of the day the forest was protected from all the barriers they have put up from the fake trees. !00 Years later… there was people visiting The tree then one person started taking pictures and put it on the internet and so people started copping them and it went viral so when people go past the sign they go and take a photo or video. The End

My animation voice over.

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Animation Voice Over





Walt be thoughtful about links between oral (spoken), written, and visual language to give purpose to our writing.


Walt use a variety of sentences and correctly use punctuation.





Your animation task: This term you have been creating an animation to illustrate a caveman narrative.





You were given this short blurb to help you plan for your animation:








Long ago, there was an ancient tribe from the country now known as __New zealand__________.





The tribe lived off the land and had to hunt and gather for their food.


In this land, the impressive ____white tiger________ was the ultimate prize because it provided food for the whole tribe. Only the most mighty and cunning warriors could hunt such an animal.

This is the story of one such tribe, on an epic hunt to catch one of these mighty animals.

Digital word bank:

PLAN-Just write some keywords to help when you write your sentences

Introduce your animation (this doesn’t need to be long): What are we learning about this term? (Inquiry topic + animation task) What materials may have been used once upon a time to create cave art?

Your narrative: Characters? Tāne Hokahoka, Tāne māhuta Setting? New zealand Problem?the tree is dying because kiwi was not home Solution? The tiger came and helped and with the hawks going to a different country

Summary/ Conclusion - Thank your audience and ask for a comment to be left on your blog.

WRITE

Hi my name is Zyla A long, long, long long time ago there was these two people named Tāne hokahoka and Tāne māhuta they went to go look for kiwi since they knew that he was the only one but instead they found a white tiger but it was weird because the white tiger was in kiwi’s space where they always meet but the white tiger did alright then a hawk came and since Tāne māhuta and Tāne hoka hoka was guardian of the forest the hawk was coming after them but until the hawk saw the white tiger so they went to a different country. After that the bugs came and started eating the trees because they knew that kiwi wasn't there but they did not know that the white tiger was there so when the white tiger showed himself and so the bugs ran away and they went to the other part #of the forest that is dying so they really did not care because those were fake trees and they put perfume so they die and don’t come back. At the end of the day the forest was protected from all the barriers they have put up from the fake trees.

DMIC

Yesterday me and my group did our dmic for the week.

A vanishing art.

Today i decided to finish off from the past week. follow this to see what i did

Keyhole writing narrative.

Keyhole Narrative

WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas

Using the picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post them to your blog before you begin writing.

Start writing here: One day Victoria and her friends said to her mother “Mother can me and my friends go for a walk around the basin” And her mother replied “yes you can go but come back but sunset” okay Victoria replied. So they went to the basin but before that they saw a secret hidden place so went in and they saw this place and they did not know what it was but then they saw a stream and so patience said “why not” and Bella said “why not what” then patience said “ why not we should go into the stream because it is so hot right now. So they went into the stream and Victoria spotted a dirt patch so they went into their bags and grabbed a rope and they wanted Victoria to go up but she did not want to hold up all of her friends. So she got up and she saw a house but the thing is she could not get down but instead they got up and they cleaned up the house then they got everything they needed so Patience went to go get her parents and her friends parents so they lived up there The end.

Narrative

Hi and today we did another narrative for this week.