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Thursday 23 August 2018

Narrative writing

Peephole Narrative


Start writing here:
Once there was four girls who were walking across town basically everyday.
One day they walked past and saw this person for the first time they all
thought that it was a dream so they turned around for a little bit then
they turned around again and then there he was sitting on in the same
spot where they saw him the last time so they asked who he was then he
just said a person who love nature so they went home to Victoria’s house
and suddenly the doorbell rang and they checked through the keyhole
and there the same person
was.

  To be continued...


Yesterday we did a keyhole narrative that we needed to finish today.Me and my buddy Aaliyah were finishng what we needed to do then we started to peer edit.

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