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Thursday 8 November 2018

That really stinks.



That Really Stinks








WALT identify the characters, setting and problem in a narrative story.


WALT write an engaging solution to the problem in a narrative story.






Watch the story starter for the story, That Really Stinks.





Plan for your writing:





Characters: Sam and Jackson and the crocodile


Setting: Bathroom, Sewer


Problem:





Write the ending for the story. When he hides behind the big rock
he shows himself and they started laughing but afterwards they got
a fright because Sam had said “you need to give the phone back to me”
but the lucky thing is the monster’s dropped it but when they ran away
they dropped the phone even though that’s one lucky thing because
Sam’s sister was waiting for him out of the bathroom but he would not
answer so Sam’s sister opens the door but she never finds Sam in the
bathroom because he got taken by some old type of creature, when Sam
gets the phone he tells the crocodile to go inside the bathroom again
and finally he gets back but Sam’s sister was looking at Sam with
a vicious look and said “where were you and what happened to my phone”
but Sam did not say anything that is part of the answer because he was
scared that the tentacle stuff will come back and take the both of
them but Sam’s sister said tell me the truth so Sam had to tell
His sister the truth but what had happened next? So Sam told her
the truth and the tentacle monster come so Sam and his sister were
so surprised just for the truth, Then the tentacle monster took them
where down the sewer again, they were lost but Sam got his new pet
crocodile that he never mentioned to his sister, so he said “Out we go”
so the crocodile went and chased the tentacle monster
quietly and safely till they saw them coming to hunt for them so Sam,
his sister and the crocodile went around the rock they were behind
and succeed and they were saving all the people that were in the kitchen
and there was only one more until they heard the monster crew coming
closer and closer so they used teamwork and they did the same
thing they did before is hide behind the rock and go around while
the monsters are walking towards the kitchen and they realised that
the people were gone then this little monster realised them and said
hey there they are so the monsters were coming after them so the
crocodile went faster and faster but they saw a secret shortcut
and pretended to go the other way so they went up the shortcut
while the monsters were wondering some random place and they
said bye to the crocodile but when they went back inside the bathroom
they took the people they had saved back home but before that they
had a shower before going home when they were finished since they
were all girls Sam’s sister handled it and let Sam have a bit of a
rest from this big day. The end.





Fast finisher?





Write the beginning of the story to go with the movie.

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